I ve just started writing for CRN Australia, and my first article is funnily enough on Microsoft servers in the SMB Market. Naturally I am keen for feedback both good and bad, so please take a look and let me know.
http://www.crn.com.au/feature/5272,microsoft-servers-in-the-smb-market.aspx
The article covers a lot of ground, and covers it well. But that’s the problem.
Too wordy. Articles need to be succinct and extremely well-organized to be digestible (at least, by me).
Poorly organized. Too much ‘S’ vs. ‘M’ definition up front. Jumps around from SBS 2008 to EBS to SBS 2003. Jumps around from SMB business practices to software features to installation activities.
And what;s with the one sentence paragraphs? That doesn;t work.